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So here is a song I'm working on.  I have a melody sort of worked out but nothing final.  Let me know what you think.

Title: not sure yet, thinking of calling it "ransomed" or something using "home".  Ideas welcome.

Verse 1

There's a place in this city

With pillars and stone

Every gold accent

and all of man's wealth.

And it's dark inside

I've seen with my eyes

the blank stares of those

walking alone

Verse 2

For most of my life

I've wandered by

these hollow memories

filled with false truths

And it's dark inside

I've seen with my eyes

the blank stares of those

walking alone

 

Refrain

You welcomed me home

Coming down from your throne

To a place you lifted up

And You rasomed me

And You ran to me

And I’m drawn deeper

Into your heart

OoouuO Jesus, you welcomed me home

 

Verse 3

There are many here Lord

Filled with stone hearts

Every word angers

Souls lost in anguish

And it’s dark inside

I’ve seen with my eyes

The blank stares of those

Walking alone

Verse 4

And all of their might

And all of their will

Cannot make them see

What life should be

And even for them

Whose resolve is thin

The blank stares of those

Walking alone

 

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